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Wednesday, February 27, 2008

Random thoughts

Not too long ago I shared with you that I'm gonna be posting on another site/community. I used to post stuff there (on a lot because the people give honest feedback and they're able to rate your writing. Their ratings equal points and the more points you get, the more prizes (gift cards, etc.) that you're eligible for.

I'm telling you this again because I hope you'll visit me over there and look at some of my old writing as well as check out some of the new stuff. Right now I'm working on a couple of poems... I guess they're poems although some of it could be considered more like prose.

I don't know. I'm no poetry expert.

These are the beginnings to the ones I like. Neither have a title yet (maybe you can help me with that):

What I told you that I wanted
Is exactly what I said
I guess it just got all messed up
Somewhere inside my head...

And the second one is:

You only think you want me
Because I am your memories
I am the girl you wanted to marry
The one to have your babies...

Well, I hope that's intrigued you enough to check me out on Gather and leave a comment and/or rating. I'll post these two poems before the end of the day (okay, when I say the end of the day, I mean by midnight!)
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